大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試模擬題一答案精析

Part I Writing

[范文]
Internet and theDistance among People
Today, the Internet has become an indispensable part of our life.We can have a video-chat with friends who are on the other side of the planet;we order food or buy other things through websites... The Internet provides uswith so much convenience that it has changed the way we live.
Wherever there is access to the Internet, communication can becarried out through instant messaging,online communities, micro-blogs and soforth. But despite the great convenience the Internet brings about, we find thedistance among people becomes farther, instead of nearer. We play online gamesand forget to call the family; we sit alone surfing the net with mobile phoneswhen classmates are gathering together; children today often play with thetablet computers, rather than with other kids from the neighborhood.
In my view, we should use the Internet reasonably, and keep inmind that the real life is much more meaningful than the virtual one. To becloser to other people, we should talk with them, using our voice, instead offinger tips. And we should pass this idea on to the younger generation.
【譯文】
互聯(lián)網(wǎng)與人們之間的距離
如今，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)已經(jīng)成為我們生活中不可或缺的一部分。我們能和地球另一端的朋友進(jìn)行視頻聊天；我們通過網(wǎng)站訂餐或者購買其他商品……互聯(lián)網(wǎng)為我們提供了如此多的便利，以至于已經(jīng)改變了我們的生活方式。只要是能接入互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的地方，人們就可以通過即時(shí)通訊軟件、網(wǎng)絡(luò)社區(qū)、微博等進(jìn)行交流。但盡管互聯(lián)網(wǎng)帶來了如此大的便利，我們卻發(fā)現(xiàn)人與人之間的距離變得越來越疏遠(yuǎn)，而不是越來越親近。我們可能只顧著玩網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲而忘了給家人打電話，也可能在同學(xué)聚會(huì)的時(shí)候獨(dú)自在角落里用手機(jī)上網(wǎng)；如今的小孩經(jīng)常是在玩平板電腦，而不是和鄰居家的小孩一起玩。在我看來，我們應(yīng)該合理使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，并且記?。赫鎸?shí)世界要比虛擬世界更有意義。為了拉近與他人的距離，我們應(yīng)該用聲音而不是用指尖多與他們交流。而且我們應(yīng)該將這一理念傳遞給年輕的一代。
【要點(diǎn)用法】
indispensable不可或缺的
micro—blog微博
video—chat視頻聊天
tablet computer平板電腦
instant messaging即時(shí)通訊軟件
virtual虛擬的
online community闞絡(luò)社區(qū)
finger rid指尖
【句法點(diǎn)評(píng)】
1．The Internet provides us with so much convenience that it haschanged the way we live．
介紹互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的影響，使用so…that…結(jié)構(gòu)來進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)。provide sb．with sth．意為“為某人提供某物”。
2．Where there is access to the Internet，communicationcall be carried out through…
wherever意為“無論在哪里”，引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句。accessto the Internet意為“接入互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的通路或途徑”。逗號(hào)后面為被動(dòng)語態(tài)，增加了句式的多樣性。
3．But despite the great convenience the Internet brings about，we find the distance among people becomes farther，instead of nearer．
despite意為“盡管”，表示讓步，其后面可以直接接名詞或名詞短語。bring about意為“帶來”。instead of意為“而不是”，有強(qiáng)調(diào)的作用。
4．…children today often play with the tablet computers，rather than with other kids from the neighborhood．
rather than后面為避免重復(fù)，承前省略了play?！班従蛹业暮⒆印奔礊閗ids from the neighborhood。

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