College Students’Living Condition

　　【范文】
　　Recently, the living condition of some college students is frequently referred to as “dwelling-narrowness”. In fact, this embarrassing situation is very serious that few of us can fail to meditate on the causes of it.

　　In the first place, it’s difficult for graduates to bear the high cost of life in big cities. Poor payment thus gives rise to bad living conditions. Next, college students are more ambitious. Many of them are eager to compete in big cities like Shanghai and Beijing, where talents are abundant and positions are limited. Refusing to go back hometown let them suffer in big cities, which indirectly make their situation worse.
Generally speaking, college students should be more qualified to better themselves and adjust their goals according to the reality.

　　首句交待背景，用無生命的名詞詞組(inanimate noun phrase)作主語(yǔ)并使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，文章更加客觀中立。第二句話使用單詞embarrassing，深入地挖掘了當(dāng)今大學(xué)生生存狀況艱難與大學(xué)生十年寒窗之間令人無奈的矛盾。第三句話為承上啟下句，fail to do sth.表示沒能、不能做某事。文章第二部分闡釋了作者的個(gè)人看法。認(rèn)為此社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的一個(gè)原因是大城市的高消費(fèi)與大學(xué)生剛剛畢業(yè)收入相對(duì)較低之間產(chǎn)生的矛盾。第二個(gè)原因來自大學(xué)生對(duì)自身期許過高與大城市人才濟(jì)濟(jì)之間的矛盾。使用單詞ambitious，表示雄心勃勃。在形容人才濟(jì)濟(jì)時(shí)，使用abundant，表示充足的。此外，文章還指出個(gè)原因是直接原因，第二個(gè)原因是間接導(dǎo)致了大學(xué)生生存困境。

　　后一段給出了解決方法，better oneself指使某人自身更加，better此處作動(dòng)詞講。

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